Hmmm. This is done very well. It is very interesting to explore the darker side of Inoue-san and something not a lot of people do, adding said darker side with Kurosaki's hollow is very interesting as well and again, not done very much.
The picture is very original, it looks very professional and all the proportions seem to be correct. The shadows and lighting are excellent.
Five stars on impact because this picture really hits you hard, because seeing Inoue-san this way is somthing that you really don't see.
Four on originality, only because there are a couple pictures with Inoue-san and the hollow.
Four point five on vision, because there seems to be something a little off, but I can't be entierly sure if it's something in the lines or in the proportions, but it's really not a big thing. Just something small.
Technique seems just fine to me and it would be lovely to see more of these excellent works.